3 out of 5 stars
Memoir
On Amazon UK HERE
On Amazon.com HERE
On Goodreads HERE
Reviewed by me as a member of Rosie Amber's Review Team
Hmm - a strange one! It's not
very long, probably novelette or short novella length, a memoir of the jobs
taken on by the author, from experience of Vietnam, to a distributor for
washing powder samples, a nightwatchman, and time on a kibbutz.
The whole presentation is quite 'experimental', a series of memory snapshots
with little to link them together. It
needs editing, for sure, and the style is eccentric, but it's not without
charm. I liked some parts, like the
author's take on pretentious art critics he encountered while working as a caretaker at a
Picasso exhibition, and the banal attitude of the masses who passed by the
works of art as if they were wallpaper or worse, and I very much liked his
observation about how, when returning from Vietnam, even things like being able
to switch on a light or sit in a comfortable chair felt like luxuries, but how
quickly one got used to them, and began to complain about stuff that didn't
matter, again...
This books reminded me of the early days of self-publishing on Kindle,
before writers were urged to make their books conform to professional standards, and to be
aware of their market; I imagine that with some re-drafting, more detail and a
more enticing cover this would appeal to the reader who seeks the unconventional.
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Saturday, 7 May 2016
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Always good to see what you consider in a review, Terry. Especially if we agree!
ReplyDeleteAha - that's me shooting over to read yours, any minute!! I know - I couldn't say I disliked this, it just wasn't anywhere near ready for publication. Rather this than something perfectly presented with no spark, though.
Delete.... just read it! You are always less critical than me in reviews, I know; I love that you zeroed in on the observations about the Picasso exhibition, too - that bit was so sharp! Could have been so much better, though; sometimes I think humorous writing needs the most fine tuning of all, to make the humour work.
DeleteI do tend to be less critical, and you have a great point about humor needing to be on point to work! I think this may be the first book we had a fairly wide disagreement on!
ReplyDeleteI think it's because I judge books in comparison with the best books I've read, trad pub or otherwise, whereas some judge in the same way they might at a creative writing critique class, for instance, which is always going to be more generous! It's a good thing we're all different.
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